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Forever Dancing Like the Trees

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Hello, my dear. Hello, my man.
Care to dance? Sweet romance?
Yes, that will do,
why yes, love to!
Like the trees?

Just you and me…

Look at them, all in pairs
dancing slowly year to year,
sporting the season’s latest styles,
dancing, swaying, tree-like smiles;

If we could both be rooted thus
from the earth, upward-thrust,
how much more happy we would be
forever dancing like the trees.

 

 

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  • ShaShay
    July 10, 2008

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    You can say so much in so few words. You never cease to amaze me. I love this and will, as always, continue to have you as one of my top favorites.


  • Frodofan silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    This a very sweet poem with that fairy tale feel. Indeed, when I first saw the picture, it made me think of dancing. Thanks for entering.

    This is a nice little poem. Well said!


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Haha. well this was all nice and fun. The picture really does look like a chorus line of dancing trees, to me anyway.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~