rose pink wisps of comfort cling to her soul
a velvet cloak of sweet perfection, to
warm against the ebb and flow of
life's eternal intricacies
cheeks blushed by delicate fingers tracing
lines of sadness, as they glide and caress
across the vistas of her heart and
wipe away a silent tear
Author notes
Prompt: http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/191/1/a/1ada7b0542c2becfe00faf9ce7807253.jpg
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Comments
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aww I thought this was a very pretty piece, very respectable indeed and it ebbs also, makes me feel so very calm and gentle
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That's exactly the way the picture made me feel honey. I know she looks a little pensive but there was a feeling of being cloaked and warm even as she was moving through the shallows. Such a beautiful picture too.
Love Mum
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Took a peek at the pic.. it's gorgeous, can't wait to see what you write! Let me know when it's done
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Lol, I'm the same. I read funny, but can't really do it, otherwise I look like a prat.
Lets see...
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/191/1/a/1ada7b0542c2becfe00faf9ce7807253.jpg
if you can't work with it let me know and I'll send you a different one to work with
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