Give me back my heart it wasn't yours
to take give me back my nights
your mares I just can't take in
my life I needed you but know I see
that's not true I'm the strength you don't
deserve I'm stronger then you now what can
you say I'll take you on any day
Author notes
I think it fits the pic good
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Comments
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I do like this, but yes, a few maybe commas or punctual things could be fixed in this to make it flow better. Otherwise, yes, it did fit the picture very well. I love that picture =) Thanks for entering & good luck !
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Well this poem needs to be fixed in grammar and in puntuation.. but the message is great .. jsut need to make it more understandable
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