With this apple I do sacrifice,
Your will, your power, your life.
Just to pass on your beauty.
To someone only more deserving.
So take a bite, make it quick,
To be delivered to your happiness.
Author notes
Just a quick write I guess. ^^"" Not much of a meaning behind it, but there is probably some depth in there. Hope you like it though. ^^ http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2413/365.jpg?1215667112
The only poem I could enter in here. ^^""""""
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (3) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gimme your greenies by crazymomma.
300 points, ended August 11, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm reading this as a break-up poem, but it's a good one. And it's not easy to write a good break-up poem. Though I guess this could have other meanings as well- it's open to interpretation.
Though I have to say, I did say five lines and this is six. I had a lot of people do that, and I've been DQing. So to be fair, I have to DQ you too.
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I have to admit that I really just don't get it. Yet somehow I like it LOL. The imagery was good. Thanks for entering and good luck
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To be honest mostly I don't understand my poem either xD...But if you take a look at the picture I wrote it for it made me think of something that had to do with Snow White...I just idk got more into it...^^"""
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Lol i think you're right,
It doesn't have meaning but yet it does.
Kind of hard to explain, eh?
Either why it's still a good poem.
Great job.
-Mandi
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This is a real cool poem. I like the fact it has no meaning. I don't know why. LOL Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thanks for the comment. ^^ I agree with you it doesn't really have a concept but I think its just the wording that attracts the reader.
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aww wow, this is great
i really enjoyed reading, and good luck with the contest
stephanie
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This was a really interesting write.. The imagery was really vivid and different thats for sure.. for a quick write you did a really good job.. thank you very much for sharing.. I really liked this.. Best of luck..
Angel
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