Twisted thoughts fill my mind
As I think of your hate filled soul
Your cold at heart beyond measures
And its time for you to go
I find the perfect accident
But its really no accident at all
Your blood will satisfy its thirsty hunger
Oh! This is going to be a ball!
I meet you at 3am
In the dark town square
I release the creature I captured just for you
To make your bones and muscles bare
Blood leaks from your throat
Where it sinks its pearl white fangs
“Goodbye my dear disgusting friend!”
Is all I ever sang
To think of your skin being ripped from your bones is truly a wonderful sight
Your corpse will rot on the cemented ground
Where your blood was spilled tonight.
Author notes
well i dont know if this is what you were looking for but...i tried...:]
hope you enjoyed
A contest entry
- Silence Within Darkness by Deathwolf Tasagka.
1800 points, ended July 24, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
do u like???
Comments
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hiiiiii
it was good but reading is boring so i didnt read it all srry
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Delightful, I speak in tone of entertained. I was emused by your intelect of coarse revenge against this evil, you builded a hate against. And this monster, amazing hiding your anger of killing them through a monster, which was amazing. Just splendiful. Interesting, very interesting write, dearest, and the best of luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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this is a lovely dark write,
i do not know if he is looking for this type of thing,
but i do know that I think this write is lovely and dark,
just my type of poem to read, bloody and filled with hate.. keep penning and best of luck in the contest,
kitty xxx aka Lost Vampyre Angel -
i loved it! amazing write! GL!
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