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What did you do

My life and best friend,
Never saw the coming end,
Left me for stupidity,
Shut my heart and threw the key,
Took away all my pain,
Somehow he was everything,
I think I forgot to say,
"Oh and by the way,
I never loved you, never cared,
You made my life too hard to bear."

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  • Sound of Madness
    July 10, 2008

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    This is really good. It has a great flow and the rhyming doesn't seem forced. Great work, and good luck in the contest.