You touch me
I shiver
You Growl with animalistic hunger,
I arch and moan
You make me feel real,
The light touch,
Rough hands,
upon soft skin.
Supple with a hint of Irony.
you push
I pull
rythmic weapon of the waves.
Drive Deeper
Feel my soul.
Every move,
Sends me further in time
Ecstacy knows no bounds
this night,
You melt into me.
soft gasps;
Together.
A contest entry
- The Yearn of a Turn by whispernthedark.
685 points, ended July 26, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for shivering...
it turns me on...
I growl...I scream...I moan...
You made me full of excitement...
I love you arching for me, honey!...
This is your most seductive gesture!
What a sweet lyric your moaning is!
I love to lay hands on you...
I love to explore you, beauty!
I push
You pull
What a beautiful battle!
I want to drive deeper, honey!
I want to feel your inside...
I'd love to melt...grinding my pleasure zone to that of yours, hottie!
Let's melt together, my love!
Erotic kisses!
Gal
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I love the images in this. Your writes are so easy to feel, tangiable. Some of the most accessable poems I've read yet. Gripping and physical. Just love it for its closeness.
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Nice write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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hmm
idk there was something abou this one that seemed different. not as passionate i guess as your others.possibly from lack of detail as the others had...but it was good but not as well as the others
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WOW
good thing i can handle erotica... well , you go girl!... i usually dont read stuff like this but this piece held my interest and it flowed nice... great talent!!!
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cute
very amazing piece i enjoyed reading it ty for entering and good luck in the contest!!
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It is an erotic war. He pushs, you pull, you melt into me. Excellent way of describing it. Good romantic touch in this write, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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