When you look me in the eyes,
You can see through my disguise,
Where from the world I hide,
Staying here alone.
When you whisper in my ear,
You're the only thing I hear,
I wish we could disappear,
Together be alone.
If forever we could stand,
I walk with you hand in hand,
Be off in our separate land,
Together we're never alone.
To sing along with you,
Becoming one from two,
The music will ensue,
As we dance alone.
Carried in my heart,
A wish to never be apart,
So our loving life can start,
I'll never leave you alone.
Only you can make me feel,
The way I need so I can heal,
And show you love I can't conceal,
With you I'll never be alone.
1:17 am
10 July 2008
Author notes
9. When you look me in the eyes- Jonas Brothers
A contest entry
- A Song Inspired options contest by Dovina.
700 points, ended July 19, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Release Me by sensualbutterfly.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Such sweet words...thank you for entering
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I love the Jonas Brothers, so that's why I decided to put this song in there, plus I thought that this would be a nice song to base a poem off of. I think you did the song justice. And I like the title and how you just did not use the original song title. Very nice write of being alone and then finding someone who you feel whole with, hoping to be together and feel alright. thanks for your entry.
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