Fire turns to padded walls surrounding her as they whisper false truths.
Sheltered she kept his heart,she knew she could cause pain with only a slight touch.
She's caused damage to many before he was suppose to be different.
Flames burn cool upon her skin as the walls speaks hush words about her sins.
Ultraviolet rays leave patterns upon his skin.
Uncontrollable heat corrupts her body trapping her within.
Emotions she's never felt before leave constant whispers in her head.
Torn between her soul and what has become of her.
Another life suffers from her repressed rage.
Author notes
DecoyDani
This is not complete im finishing it at this moment i just wanted to post in case i delete it by accident which sadly i do on occasions.I may shorten the first stanza.
Prompts:Inside the Inferno/The Whispering Walls
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Would you like me to wait to judge it until it is finished
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You can judge it now i dont think i'll be able to finish it , my muse is pretty much gone.
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Let's see...
The Whispering Walls
hopefully this one will work for you
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I got an quirky idea when i saw "The Whispering Walls" and i was wondering if i could combine it with the title "Inside The Inferno" to make a twist.
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yup, that seems cool to me, can't wait to see what you come up with
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great title something i could really get into i'll get to writing right away.
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Title: Inside the Inferno
Please let me know if this one doesn't work for you and I'll give you something else
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Can i get another prompt for some reason i can't be instantly inspired
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