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Christmas In July




Caught in a blizzard;
non-melting flakes turn into
fluffy white seed pods.
©2008 rous
7-9-08

Author notes

Written for the contest: Contest Haiku Contest --- for 'Visions through Haiku' Members only. (Application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas Summer

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2413001

Elrénia

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  • Noir mariposa...x
    July 22

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    Awww that's gorgeous; the imagery is marvelous. I suck at writing haiku but apparently you don't!!

    I wish you all the best luck with your poem ^^
    Claire x

    • Elrenia
      July 22
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      Thank you. I think I suck, but apparently those more experienced like some of my haiku. LOL

      rous

  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 16

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    Caught in a blizzard;
    non-melting flakes turn into
    fluffy white seed pods.

    Beautiful imagery has been presented in this Haiku.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas