I wanted you
I dreamed of you
So long before you were mine
Then I had you
I held you
And felt things I couldn't define
But I got scared
I let you go
Hoping to leave you behind
Yet now
I want you
I dream of you
And of moments lost in time
A contest entry
- Filled with emotion, any kind of poetry by Vidasmoke.
675 points, ended July 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like the flow, good job
and good luck
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This is amazing.
This is a great job. The emotion is present and the poem flows so nicely.
I've always been a fan of short-and-sweet. You've done an excellent job with it.
Good work.
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