finger on your pulse
i feel your heart beating
opening your eyes
you're coming to life
your body starts shaking
syncopated spasms
timing so precise
sharper than a knife
trans:
from the depths of my soul i feel you
your rhythm's in my blood, i've got to move...
chorus:
oh, music, music
sweet surrender
people, testify!
oh, glorious music
you give me wings
now i've got to fly
chaotic vibrations
measured out in time
orgasmic release
in a single chord
hypnotizing beats
low-end resound
a million praises
oh music, adored
trans 2:
take me higher, take me higher...
repeat chorus
/break/
bridge:
from the tiniest strain to the deepest bass
you orchestrate within my soul
thunderous applause from outer space
progressive funky rock and roll
repeat chorus 2x
fade:
oh, music, music...
oh, music, music...
Author notes
Lyrics written in the vein of King's X
Photo Credit:
Doug Pinnick of King's X
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/32/40321231_1750cc4954.jpg?v=0
“Now check the rewards”
In a list
A contest entry
- Music From The Poet’s Soul by ennovy.
1800 points, ended August 10, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS I- GOLD - SILVER - BRONZE FOR EACH by Florida Sunshine.
475 points, ended August 16, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - songs by mitchie.
354 points, ended October 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very cool song...great write...thanks for entering
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i've heard this song before.and i sorta like it thanks for entering best of luck,lily
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That was good I could almost hear the song in my head
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I''ve been to a few concerts like this poem has presented. 'Future man' -- doubt you'd know him ~ I don't think many people do unless they listen to that kind of music ~ but he's worth listening too.
"from the depths of my soul i feel you
your rhythm's in my blood, i've got to move..."
Oh yeah... I love this line!
Beautiful from start to finish -- this is what I feel when I hear music ~ Thanks for entering the contest and sharing your work with me ~ it was my pleasure to read and review your work.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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A beautiful song about beautiful music...yeah, I'd be humming it too! Thanks for entering...
Good luck in the contest,
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Nice lyric's I would love to hear this preformed...because I like the concept of the song...Thanks fo entering our contest...Brazos & Novy
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Amazing work. I am not a fan of todays music but I can understand the meanings here. You don't have to be a fan to understand. This was well done and I am glad I added you to my favorites. Pen on...
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WOW
nicely written, amazing constructed, and with I awe I sit here reading it over and over, great Job Tim
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thank you, your comments are greatly appreciated! it's funny, i based the style off king's x and i can hear them playing this in my head! i'd be driving or working and the chorus would start and...well, it was fun, thank you!
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Okay again Outstanding!!!!!
I completely loved these lyrics, decribing the way music makes you feel!!! I think you have tapped into the one playing and the ones listening!
I am trying to pick a favorite part but i really can,t it is all a total high!!!
These words scream music!
Love,
~Lisa~
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Thank you, my Beloved~
"I think you have tapped into the one playing and the ones listening!"
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That was the intent, as I am an avid partaker of both!
"I am trying to pick a favorite part but i really can,t it is all a total high!!!"
~ Yes, music is addictive and the high is something you needn't worry about frying your brains with!
I know you meant the words, thank you.
Tim
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