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Changing of the Seasons

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Color and sound
touch my soul
through finger tips
as I brush the breeze before me

announcing the arrival
of the awe inspired season
come forth the Fall
is upon us

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Upon mountains high
I sit and think
the breeze circles my soul
as each breath leaves my lips

clouds float by
within the clear blue sky
telling me it is time
for the changing of the leaves

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Come with me
to the sea
as the waves come crashing down
with a soft spoken sound

Mother Nature is calling
come have a look see
at all the wonderous things
that lay before you

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I say unto you
she is all that is left
of a world once loved
and well cared for

with each passing day
her beauty is taken away
sit with her a while
and bask in her glory


~Lady Raven~

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Listening to Dream Cather by Kevin Locke and each line seemed to just flow.

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  • goddesskevauna
    July 14, 2008

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    That's beautiful, sis! I love it! My favorite time of the year! I wish it were here now! I so hate summer! I miss you, sis! Muah!

  • cat726-12
    July 9, 2008

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    Wow, I can really relate to that. I truly appreciate the wonders of Fall and all others seasons. You seem to actually understand the beauty and importance of nature and it being sustained and appreciated. Rock on!


  • owlishhunter
    July 9, 2008

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    Simply beautiful, my dear! One of the more potent pieces to leave your pen in quite some time...I feel this one somewhere special. Perhaps it was listening to the music in the background as you wrote it...

    I love you, Angel!!!


    • vampira1665 silver member
      July 9, 2008
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      You know Autumn/Fall is my favorite season and this music seems to bring it out. I am glad you enjoyed it. I love having you read my work and commenting on it.

      I love you Kris!