enery one makes their bed,
but i wounder if they make theirs like i do.
the best way to make a bed is to have a lil fun first.
go find your sweety,
kiss them passanitly,
and gently lead them to the bed room.
slowly take off each others cloths,
touching their skin,
holding them.
now crawl into bed,
and make it messy,
love your partner in every way.
now that your both content,
go share a shower,
and cleanr your bodies.
all squeky clean,
grabe clean sheets whail,
your partner stripes those on the bed.
now you can put on the sheet,
lay out the blinket, the pillows,
just the way you like them.
and thats how a bed should be made.
Author notes
prompt: make the beds
A contest entry
- Clean My House by AmyPixiDust.
600 points, ended July 22, 13 entries
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Comments
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i love the detials you have used in this poem and the nice twist that you have added to a chore that everyone makes there bed, well i guess that it should be messy first before you make it, thats what i think too, this poem speaks loudly allthough there are a few spelling errors i still understood what you were discribing, thank you for the entry and as always keep up the writing, ~Amy
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