Choked out words
Through the smoke of your lies
Passively breathing in
All the deceit; your final death
Unwilling to share it with you
But no choice
Once an angel
Now covered in the powder
Of hate; irresponsible for your own
You lie... blaming others
For your failure
Of being a friend
A lover
A father
A {MAN}
Forever I will be scarred by you
But no more
As once I breathed in your abuse
I will breathe out love
For myself
For others like me
To live
Author notes
prompt http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs31/300W/f/2008/189/0/8/___and_breathe_out_by_Gwarf.jpg
A contest entry
- Title/Picture/Quote Prompt! Reserve and Write! Multiple Entries! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended July 22, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this comes from my thawing heart.. can you hear it beat?
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that is really heart wrenching pain to say in the least. i am sorry you had to endure this honey -
this my shadow angel, is profound and deep. thought provoking and a great message. one that needs to be heard every where. You did a brilliant job on this. there aren't enough words to say how much you have touched me with this poem of yours. excellent job
good luck
mommy
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Oy~
This is one Powerful piece penned- Your Voice radiates volumes and the images stun~
Excellent!!
The line: Now covered in powder-
grabs hard~
Love this and You Precious
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Grammy Desire~*~
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Oy~
Will be back and Best Wishes Precious
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its finshed
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Wow You fast-
Me read now
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http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs31/300W/f/2008/189/0/8/___and_breathe_out_by_Gwarf.jpg
all up to interpretation, but to me this is something sinister, let me know if you would prefer another though
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