Disturbing images of brutal contests,
Cycles of finales demolish my pleasant days,
while you seem to bewail the torment
of consuming every inch of hope...
Affirmative conclusion; there's no more war,
no more dynamism, no more brutal effect...
Only mass distress and overwhelming discomfort
reside inside this blood pumping machine...
Wilting effects of brutal completions
and aging away this darkened day...
I dare defy the Gods, I dare annihilate the illumination,
that you once decided to follow by your own...
Debating your suggestions,
I will not raise a waging war
when there is no amount of substance
that will wake my desire to fight....
If your desire is to fulfill your wish,
then raise your mighty power to the God's
and defy them in my honor,
while your perceverance eludes away the peace left inside...
~♥~
Author notes
Tired of these endless games,
Time to end the darkened day
To raise the sword
To kill the light
Because there is no reason left to fight..."
-Night Oasis
Well my inspiration was great but my muse was a little shut donw
hope I did well for I did like this piece...
XXVampireeyesXX
A contest entry
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Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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I like where you took this.
distantly, some of this makes me think of a song too, as in you could make it into a song.
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i say its wonderfully sad i like it.... and you like it so who cares what others say.... thanks for shairng and goooooood luck in contest...
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Tired of these endless games,
Time to end the darkened day
To raise the sword
To kill the light
Because there is no reason left to fight..."
-Night Oasis
Hopefully you can get something from this, unless you want another picture, either is cool with me
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http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs4/300W/i/2004/258/1/e/Die_by_Damaiscus.jpg
let mek now if you want a different one
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