Caressing cool waters edge;
laps against amber.
kiss of moon beam fills
inner being, glow.
Foot prints left, wet sand
wind places angels earth.
walk in steps of women
ignite hearts of all men,
sweet exotic scent lingers,
candle sways in breeze.
A contest entry
- Just Pay It Forward!! by honorable mention.
700 points, ended July 15, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lovely write here, congrats on t he pretty shiney hehe
thanks for sharing
Tasha
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A very intriguing piece here in few words. Straight forward weaving thoughts on the image. I feel a sense of abstract here; the flow itself seems course - though still quite a lovely piece!
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beautiful!
WOW! beautiful words and the pictures they produce in my head. very well done! i also LOVE the picture you have with the poem. both the picture and the poem blend wonderfully together and create one heck of a work of art before me here. great work!
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Oh lovely. A soft write, the words caress the mind. This is beautiful.
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Beautiful words! This is so soft and lovely! I really couldn't pick a favorite line as they are all beautiful and go so well together - and with the picture, too.
best wishes in your contest.
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Thank you so much means a lot thank you
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