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even though i'm a fake.

wires constrict my trembling movement!
oh how i long to be in your arms.
you always make me so happy.
i miss your touch and the way you look at me.

i will wait for you.
i will pray for you.
i will watch the stars in light of you.
i will suffer for your sake.

love is of sacrifice, and i would die for you.
you are also the one for whom i would gladly live.
know that no one else could take your place in my heart.
i love you, and my life i do give.

i will wait for you.
i will pray for you.
i will watch the stars in light of you.
i will suffer for your sake.

for you are my breath when i wake.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 15, 2008

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    Ah..true love and its shapes..images are crafted with the penning of the love using the ink of the sentiments..well done...


  • Sound of Madness
    July 9, 2008

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    Wow, I know exactly who I'd love to send this out to, it's amazing. You put into words exactly what I'd love to tell someone and have wanted to tell them for a long time. Great work.


  • phynix
    July 9, 2008

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    "love is of sacrifice" love may include sacrifice, but it is also one of the greatest things u can feel (it also can be the worst..) awesome poem tho, it rly shows that u love this person. my favorite line is when u say "for you are my breath when i wake"