Soaring canvas of color,
amused by diamond sky.
Bright, visual shades untouchable
by the darkened night.
Pot of shiny gold awaits,
yet, not for sale on cart,
glittered sprinkle of scenery so bright,
lands within my heart.
Author notes
37 words - Great prompt! (Prompt is : Where Rainbows End)
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In a list
A contest entry
- Where Rainbows End - around 30 words by Cindy.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very beautiful!
You did well in descibing the scenery. It misses bringing the character to life. I've learned with images like these most judges want you 'not' to describe the image but to use it as a prod for your stream of 'consciousness'
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Excellent
Wonderful creation for the contest. So very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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I can see this poem visually in my mind as I read and it is a very nice vision. Nice take on the title prompt. thanks for the entry
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very beautifully written poem good luck in the contest
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