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Rainbow


The end of the rainbow,
is always out of reach.
Pastel colors hypnotize,
as I chase along the trail.
Looking for that pot of gold,
that ends with this rainbow.









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  • PurringKitten silver member
    July 9, 2008

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    always searching but never finding...pastel colors hypnotize...i love the snappy little beat you have going on here congrats on the gold!

  • Amarige
    July 9, 2008

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    Wow hahaha can I borrow some trophies dear?lol..you are in writing mood today..God bless Karl..this is stunning piece..great job
    Ruby

  • Cindy
    July 9, 2008

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    Kind of like chasing our own tails huh, life is a mess but it is our mess and I guess we like it that way. Otherwise we would capture the rainbows and keep them in fruitjars on the store shelves. Love the poem