Dreams lay down in the dust
And the road begins to rise
Mountains appear where mists obscured before
Rain-scrubbed my journey lies ahead
Steep,crushing and defiant
I have swallowed the half-orb
for good luck.
A contest entry
- Where Rainbows End - around 30 words by Cindy.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The opening line in this poem is very good and stopped me in my tracks to ponder on what the poem was going to be about, nice work in getting that responce from me. I like your take on the title prompt too.
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Thank you Cindy for the appreciation and the honor. Enjoyed your contest a lot.
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"Half Orb" Nice
Best of luck 
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