A bridge supported by frail faith
can collapse with a single raindrop,
but one held up with trusses of trust
will endure countless downpours.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quote Me, Please by 2lullabyhaven.
475 points, ended July 28, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Short...to the point, and absolutely fantastic.
I appreciate short poems more than long ones, as it is much harder to convey a lot of content in short sentences.
Keep up the good work.
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Like the imagery here.
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It was short...but I find it could be better. It has imagination...and I do like how you worded it :3 Under five lines can be difficult ^^;
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For sure, wow, how impactful; thanks for your entry and good luck lol
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Could have done better
It was strong but very very short , i was hoping to read more because the title interested me.
The good : Points true north! has strength and imagination.
The Bad : So short it makes the readers disappointed (speaking for myself) you much more you could have gone on about , but chose not to. -
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Thank you for your comment. I would have liked for it to be longer as well but the contest called for something under 5 lines so I had to work with that.
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