Color of northern lights move,
Love flows in their rhythm..
As the end is reached life
never seemed so sweet,
when I once tasted the rainbow
in your soft kiss..
Author notes
Prompt - title
What the title says ... Approximately 30 words
will close today
1 entry per poet 10 poets
A contest entry
- Where Rainbows End - around 30 words by Cindy.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lovely!
I saw the northern lights - and they were awesome! One of the most beautiful things I've ever seen - so mystical and mysterious, so beautiful.
I love your wording! So much said in just a few lines. Great images. And your last 2 lines are perfect!
Well done!
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when I once tasted the rainbow in your soft kiss.. wonderful take on the promt congratulations on your honor
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really awesome take on the prompt hun, very soft and beautiful. i love it
well done on the HM too
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this is wonderful huni,
it has such love in it,
and yes it would be simple if it was that easy eh?
all my love,
kitty xxx -
So softly sad hun and beautifully done. Congrats on the HM. C
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If only love were to flow as easlily as the northern lights huh, life would be much simpler. good take on the title prompt. thanks for entering
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Very creative and unique take on the prompt!
"Northern Lights" Just a marvelous title for your piece.. Great mix of feeling and imagery! Best of luck!
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I just adore the imagery and metaphore. This is amazing!
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