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Where Dreams Begin

Dreams convulse,
where sane minds dare not go.
They are only tangible in solitude,
when no one cares.
Only one who cups their dream in hand,
-nurtures it through unfathomable cruelty,
can learn where dreams begin.

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36 words.
Prompt: Title, around 30 words.

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  • Cindy
    July 9, 2008

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    Thank you Brit-Girl for this fabulous entry. I love the poem and the wording is great, the second stanza made me say (wow) thanks