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Oh The Pressure

Oh the pressure

that I have to battle,

never finding relief

from those days of fiery agony,

which bring my inside to a boil.

 

I dream of cool water poured down my throat,

calming my world, granting me sweet release,

from the simmering seconds when my life turns cruel and harsh.

 

How brutal are my caretakers,

never content to simply let me sleep in peace,

they come in the dread of lusts

to drown my gut in liquid with no regard my feelings.

 

Then with hellish torment inclinations

do they roast my body above a flame

until grows so intense

my mouth screams for mercy from the pain.

 

It is the epitome of humiliation

when they forced me to vomit

what they made me drink

watching in horror and disgusts

as they make it into some hideous brew.

 

Hours then I am left

for contemplating the misery of my existence

sometimes reminiscing those days of innocence,

back in haven when I had communion with my brothers

before being adopted by these beings with their sadistic urges.

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Prompt choice: Teapot

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  • BellaD
    July 15, 2008

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    Wow! So cleverly written. Love the perspective you've given this teapot. Very well done. I love it all. Thank you for this entry.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    wow fantastic take on the promt makes you feel sorry for the teapot poor thing lol loved your emotions in the following lines fantastic
    Oh the pressure that I have to battle,never finding reliefback in haven when I had communion with my brothers
    before being adopted by these beings with their sadistic urges.from those days of fiery agony,which bring my inside to a boil.they come in the dread of lusts
    to drown my gut in liquid with no regard my feelings.good luck in the contest

  • chiefmac
    July 9, 2008

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    The question at the narrators lips, how do I get relief from this agony. I see metphor for many sets here, a parent who can not give one of many children self discpline, one with any assortments of psycholocial ailments, or someone just stessed on the rigors of life without any way out. Hating to giveup seeking solutions, yet, beyond their grasp for relief from this drama. This misery does offer days of pleasure and days adopting to release the cause misery without caring long term solution.