I checked out the one and only LP;
I was transfixed by his awesomeness.
I was enthralled by his handy wit.
Noticing his outgoing personal charm
was a pleasure for this lady-in-arms.
His heart inside is as big as all get-up.
He's all over the place, but with purpose.
He's a song away for the broken amongst us.
Waving the banner high above us, but near,
to a lot of folk he is becoming most dear.
Young at heart and in real-time age, too.
Grasping for eternal values is his aim.
Noting his fierce, fine, flair for all things God,
one must be quick to appoint him Father's son.
Like Father, like son; he will not be outdone.
I personally like his mystique, so sweet.
Like a good poker player; he doesn't tell all.
He leaves a trail to follow, a path to trod.
A good soldier fights with all at his disposal;
He comes out then with interesting proposals.
Serves mankind with fervent heart; passionate soul.
Gets things done, impacts thoughts, connects.
Sometimes the great ones amongst us are not so seen.
But, he shines forth with light from high above,
therefore he's showered in this poem with love!
Author notes
To the great LP; this is just a token of a poem, I know within myself that I have only touch upon your surface; perhaps one day I can get to add more chapters...love, Pat
A contest entry
- The Lowercase Prelude "About Me" Challenge by Lowercase Prelude.
500 points, ended July 12, 5 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely written poem to tell us how much of a good person he is. Thanks for the look.
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a good dedicational piece penned here, it is always nice to get a poem written for you by another poet in arms.
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Thanks, Ian, thanks for always encouraging my tributory poems, they are special to me lol
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Very good
I felt your love within this piece and yes if you add to this I would sure love to read more .
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I'll try and keep that in mind and let you know when it happens...thanks for the lovely review lol
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*blushes*
how sweet. i am glad i can have such an impact on people.
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