i might bite

darkness and fog,
early morning dew
the creatures are all around you.

boo!

don't be scared,
I only want a bite,
just to taste your blood
it wont hurt for long.

mummmmmmmm!

tasty
and tender,
the number one contestant.
I can see from your skin
that you'll cook nice in chicken.

hop in!

i can't fight the feeling
i'm yearning for flesh.

and you perfect for dinner.

Author notes

you can trust me. i wont bite

A contest entry

Dead Poet's Society (the awakening) by Dark Otter. 1000 points, ended July 23, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

any other topics i should try to wright about?

Comments

By me, right now

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Dark Otter
July 9, 2008

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Thank you!
for being my first contestant. This has a little taste of evil to it. With a little more seasoning it could make a nice zombie/vampire story. Thank you for the smile you put on my face.
Lost Emo
July 9, 2008

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lmfao this was weirdly funny and ur author note is hilarious. my fave bit was:

I can see from your skin
that you'll cook nice in chicken.

lol. good luck in the contest.