I could feel his breath on my neck as he slowly begin to whisper in my ear
My heart was pounding as he mouthed these forbidden words
His voice sounded so steady and eager to please me
Slowly he begin to touch me and I could feel his rough hands glide down me
As we touch lips and his tounge slipped inside i could taste him
He was taunting me with his eyes and making she shiver with his taste
I could feel him pull me closer to his naked form and i shuddered
As his part rubbed up against my stomach teasing me with every touch
I knew this was it we were going to make sweet love
He picked me up and moved me slowly to the bed
I watched in wonder as this man stood before me with love
He begin to touch my body more until he reached my quivering thighs
He touched the inside of my thighs with his hand then he put it inside
I could feel it thrusting inside the bottoms of my stomach
I became so moist and so full of burning desires
It felt so good and so right as I climaxed to his size
I looked up at him in awe of what he made me feel and I knew
I knew that this was pure ecstasy and it would never go away
I knew in my heart we both would never forget how it felt to be inside
Author notes
not very good could be better wrote it in 10 mins
What did you think
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it does have potential i'll give ya that.
i did find one thing though...you used "breathe" in the wrong sense. the way you spelled it should have been without the "e" on the end. because breathe represents like "i could feel him breathe" just for future ref.

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Thanks I actually hadnt noticed that before lol and I even know how to use to words in the right context. Oh well bad typo. Thanks though.
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no problem. glad i could help.
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