I’ve always been known to make the wrong choice
When I want to tell you how I feel it's as if I have no voice
I’m constantly battling between my [♥heart♥] & my m.i.n.d
My emotions never seem to be clearly defined
I grasp whatever my hands can take
...the purity of envy
It was too late when I realized I was making a mistake
...because chasing you won't set me free
I know what's b/e/s/t for me, but I don't want that at all
It's always raining inside my head
Reminiscing on all the things you once said
But I knew [xx.we've never been right.xx]
I wouldn't dare touch or get too close to you...(like you do)
I feel safe...but its just never felt right with you
You watch me battle between my [♥heart♥] & my m.i.n.d
Though we both know what we want to find
It was a false step from the start
...but we gave in to what we wanted
We'd always look inside our corrupted hearts
...though I was so damn daunted
You know what's r/i/g/h/t & w.r.o.n.g, but you haven't left just yet
I'm always overthinking the obvious
I never should've want to kiss your lips
When I've known [xx.we've never been right.xx]
So when the time comes I'll let you go
But I promise you, I'll never let you know
What's buried in the back of my cluttered mind
...my emotions that are clearly defined.
Author notes
Humans have a knack for choosing precisely the things that are worst for them.
J. K. Rowling
A contest entry
- Title/Picture/Quote Prompt! Reserve and Write! Multiple Entries! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended July 22, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow this was beautiful! This was a well deserved trophy! I absolutely love this, it's so honest and just all around lovely.
You write very well.
Blessings,
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I can see exactly why you were given a trophy for this, it was absolutely fantastic....
I could relate to every single line... its weird how I read this and can almost feel as though the words were coming from my own pen...
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Thank youuu =) Yeah. I'm so. hah. Idk what the word is. I'm still in this stupid little situation though. The guy is taken, the girl is not. Let the complications begin ! Gotta love love. Or lust. whatever it is.
♥
Thanks againnn.
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this sounds like it should be a song
its so pretty!
'So when the time comes I'll let you go
But I promise you, I'll never let you know
What's buried in the back of my cluttered mind
...my emotions that are clearly defined. '
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i love those lines!
xx
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Hmmm I like where you come with this, it sort of sounds like me always falling for the wrong guy, my mum says I choose the exact opposite for partners than what I should lol.
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Humans have a knack for choosing precisely the things that are worst for them.
J. K. Rowling
Let me know if you want a different quote. I just agree personally As Shakespeare put it "What fools these mortals be!"
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Ahhh no I pretty much LOVE that quote. hah, it really explains me & my current dilemma 100% Thankss ! ♥
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