‘Lighting on her with brazen wings
giving his love through signs of lust.
A cloying scent that sweetly sings
an offering of honeyed dust.
And gently with a touch so light
replaces fear with new born trust.
Slipping his gift safe out of sight
an offering of honeyed dust.
To pledge his troth on final day
and then expire as ruled he must.
He sighs and slowly fades away
an offering of honeyed dust.
‘Lighting on her with brazen wings
an offering of honeyed dust.
Author notes
Rhyme scheme: AbaB cbcB dbdB AB
Image Credit:
Sensual by ~Ottokees
http://ottokees.deviantart.com/art/Sensual-51280554
A contest entry
- Contest Erotica Extravaganza Part 2 Of 5(Picture Inspired) by Cerulean Sunrise.
1000 points, ended August 14, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful Kyrielle Sonnet and worthy of this beautiful trophy. Not at all surprised to see you here. Wonderful work. Congratulations. ~Pamela
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like troth and wow, honeyed dust.
Enjoyed.
Thank you.
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I must say that this is definitely an uplift from the last round, for me. I found it flowed together smoothly and the imagery really stuck out beautifully.
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Just beautiful Tattboy. Competition will be stronger for this round, but I see you are ahead of the game. Intriguing format and a stirring read.
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i do not know what a Kyrielle Sonnet is, but i can say that this was soft, sensual and truly a magnificent write!
The sentiment behind this oozed such sensuality!
well done and as always, Your writing skills amaze me ...
forever Yours,
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Your anchor lines are sensational and truly MAKE this Kyrielle Sonnet exquisite. Superbly done. You need no luck in this round. Well done. Wow. ~Pamela
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