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I Knew I Shouldn't Have Ate That Last Truffle

I knew it all along,
-yet I decided to bake the cake.

So to speak of course, for,
I was indubitably bored and,
lacking the imagination to preoccupy my hands with something useful,
I snatched a tiny truffle from,
your yellow window pane.
I knew I shouldn't have ate that last truffle,
and I know I should say eaten,
but do you truly care about my flaws,
now that my nose is sweetened?

I should say my heart, right?
You always catch my faults,
and yet you never saw the missing truffle 'till it was gone,
and by then it was too late to speak.
For words become weary without use,
and noses become sour without kisses.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 13, 2008

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    Lol this makes me laugh and makes me think at the same time, love the way you worked the title in, very amusing!


  • penman gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the prompt. so very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 9, 2008
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    Title: I Knew I Shouldn't Have Ate That Last Truffle

    What, you said you wanted rantom, there we go for random! Let me know if you want a different one though.

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