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Dave

Tiresome days at the office float by,
Soul mates with the television.
The dining room choked by dust,
Always eating on the couch.

Until the time arrived
When a switch flickered in his ageing mind:
His days would run smoother
If he packed an eraser.

The wig was sewn
And red velvet did appear;
Church orchard was the scene
Where heart and soul grew near.
Graceful dip to knees
Joined by the trace of a raging smile;

This epic wait had been worth the while.

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  • Gypsie Ink
    July 18, 2008

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    Fantastic!

    I read it once, didn't click. I read it again, and OMG! I so got it. Brilliant and sensational! Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in my contest.