I did not look for love, but love found me
And then my life was changed in every way
I poured my heart out into poetry
That told of how I loved her every day
She wrapped me up in tissue paper lies
And I believed that every one was true
I dreamt that I was living in her eyes
Which sparkled like the sun on morning dew
She told me that she'd met a better man
And stole the heart I didn't know I owned
When she arrived it changed the master plan
The happiness she gave was only loaned
But now she's gone I fear that I am lost
For I must love again and bear the cost
Author notes
When your love lets you go you only want love more
Even when love wasn't what you were looking for
Tegan And Sara
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give me what you got its that simple.
only one rule: NO RHYME
unless it is REALLY GOOD!
A contest entry
- ~QUICKIE QUOTE~ by righteousme.
525 points, ended July 18, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It's good rhyme, bro, but is it going to set the world aflame?
The poem itself is no sae bad. A better man? I doubt it!
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while the rhyme wasnt half bad... it hasnt made me a fan... sorry... but i am still glad you entered and my sister who LOVES rhyme says your the best on this site... so thank you so much for your time and talent...
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Your sister must have great taste!
I enjoyed writing I'll have to find something better to convert you! -
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Send him one of mine!
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This is good so I do notthink they can rub this one out!!!!!
xxx Bumpy -
yes well you hang with sorry people youget sorry reactions..come here and let me handle that.
Love you
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