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Silk Rain Fall

I painted my final picture with a smile on my face;
The blue and green blend
Of opportunity.

For so many years
I watched her abuse the present;
Was there any point of
The ||silk|| ribbon?

The epiphany was a fresh ocean of light,
Pain surrounding her
Weathered eyes reflected
In my
Tears of
{rain}

Yet the faintly glowing Sun was soon to
[fall]
That moment of realisation will be carved
Into my head forever.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2008

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    yes you are so true..we all are under the same impression of life of this beauty..well done...thanks..