Run your mouth like you have something to state
When I state the obvious that its you i hate
Decietful words spew out of your unapologetic mouth
And you wonder why everything has gone south
Your a mean spirited person with only yourself in the end
You keep trying to be apart of me, but I will not bend
I sit here and wonder why someone like you is here
Then everything becomes so utterly clear
I think you were just a test to see how well I could deal
In the end I know I am strong and my heart did heal
So I wait for the day when I won't hear a word
Because we are of the past and i have heard what I heard
So move on with your life and make it what you will
Because my heart has a lot of room to fill
Do what you wish, but remember I dont care
I am no longer the girl who has to be there
What did you think
Comments
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Very well written. Your third line was descriptive in ways that have lost their fluency in this time. I love you story, your flow and your passion!


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Wow, this poem is amazing. The flow was flawless, and the emotion was so real. I really enjoyed this poem. The last line brings it to a great close, for both the girl, and the poem. Good write!


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Nice!!
This is really deep!...I really like this poem! "Do what you wish, but remember I don't care, I am no longer the girl who has to be there" This was my favorite part...I can really relate to this...and my friend VirgoCrescentMoon914 says she can relate to this too. She said to read her poem "Must Move On" Thanks....Good write! Keep up the good work!!!
~Kayla~




