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The Earth is God's Canvas

The world is full of colors.
From the deep blue sky and oceans,
To the green grass and forests,
The suns golden rays morning and evening,
The endless range of colors in the birds,
And the rainbow itself showing its true colors.
With the colors and the beauty in nature,
Only one thing can be said
God is an artist and
The Earth is God's canvas,
Where He can paint his dreams and
Where they become our reality.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2008

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    Your sketches are very beautifully stated describing HIS face of beauty...Thank you so much for entering my contest..my friend...


  • WhiteAngelCake
    July 9, 2008

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    Good luck in the contest! I like the last two lines, and the 9th one! If you change this poem, I think you should keep those lines.

    -Alien