Plushly comforted
I close my eyes.
I can almost imagine
Your sweet surprise.
Fingertips bare
And skin so soft.
I can feel your smile,
Intoxicating dose.
Pleasuring lips
And feelings immense.
My emotions run wild.
I let down my defence.
Caressing hands
In just the right places.
Give your soul to me.
I've lost all patience.
Passion swells,
I see your trust.
Endowed with love
That's true and just.
Whispered words.
I can't compare.
Only to you
Do I seem so fair.
Silent tears
Of love undying.
Forever in your arms
Our two souls flying.
Author notes
Alright, this poem is my first stab at slightly erotic poetry. What do you honestly think?
A contest entry
- Anything and Everything!!! by LivinitupCutie.
450 points, ended July 28, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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lovely write but for some reason there's something missing..probably needs more detail or emotions to it nevertheless great piece for your first time
thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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