The silence
painfully loud
No voices
sing out
"Can't you see me?"
Lost
in a crowd
Life ignores
the invisible
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended July 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh my oh my such emotive power, in so few words
I COMPLETELY LOVE THIS
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Awesome. i love shorter pieces and this was no excpetion!
Brilliant penned and well put together wording. Keep it up! (Well, onward to read more of your work..
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Thanks much for the read and comment. This pic gave me the feeling of being alone in a crowd.
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wow. i thought that this was amazing. I loved it. great job.
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Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad u enjoyed it!
darlintlc
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Good job on the prompt and lots said in such a few words! Like the 'invisible' concept of thinking here. Like 'how can one be missing?' Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Thanks for the comment on "Invisible" I was just thinking about my life and when I looked at this picture it was like...nothings missing the others just don't see it! Anyway that's how I seen this picture.
Thanks again
darlintlc
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hidden you must be...... for im sorry i can not see...
please reveal your self to me...... so i too can believe......
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thanks for sharing this it was pretty good.... thank you for entering and good luck in contest.....! -
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Thanks for your kind words...I'm trying to make myself seen again so look out I might be standing right beside you! lol
your sister
darlintlc
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Excellent take on the pic! Very unique and thought provoking. I really like this!
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Thanks for commenting on "Invisible" I havn't wrote anything in awhile and I'm tring to join the world again. Ha! It's been bad cause I have not even been able to comment on others poems...so for that please forgive me my friend.
Thanks for reading
darlintlc
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