I gave you my heart
A gift saying I'll never depart
But you broke it...
I gave you my kiss
Something so precious as this
But you took another...
I gave you every single tear
Just knowing you'd be near
But you didn't take the time to dry mine
I made you a card...with a smile
Just to see yours for a while
But you frowned and threw it away
I made you a cookie
But I eated it...
And though the tears may flow
This time my pain wouldn't show...
A contest entry
- Uncommon Words for a Common Picture PIF by reeseXtheXsoldier.
600 points, ended July 10, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Irrelevent, removing.
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thanks i like your page!!
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I loved it! I had to read it a second time, it was so good. Thanks for entering!
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wow!
I really like this. So short and sweet and almost delicate with passion. I love it! Off to the finals with you!
And keep uo the good writing!
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