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A question

With a wave a rainbow resonates

and light shines on the land,

So I often sit and wonder

is this really what he planned?

Stars illuminate his pallet

and guide his loving hand,

across majestic green savannas

and golden yellow sand.

 

Picture perfect landscapes

beauty sometimes surreal,

Perfection in serenity

that's somehow not quite real.

You painted such a vision

then invited us to steal,

everything of beauty

so tell me

             "what's the deal?"

 

 

 

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The Earth is God's Canvas... Unknown

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 14, 2008

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    i like the spiritual thoughts within this Si,

    i like the questioning too, giving it the realness


    Cind


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2008

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    Just beautiful painting of HIS journey..I love this piece..well done...Thank you so much for entering my contest..my friend...


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 9, 2008

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    i miss you dad so so much
    but this poem is amazing, the rhyme is just amazing,
    it isnt forced at all, all my love,
    your should do good in the contest,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 9, 2008
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    i love yuo daddy
    -looks at the word god and wrinkles her nose-


    • Unsigned gold member
      July 10, 2008
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      lol...I just liked the prompt so I thought I would write...it is also the reason I chose the background I did...

      Love you sweetie

      Dad
      'XXXXX


  • StarEyes
    July 9, 2008

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    Ohhhhhhh, my dear brother! This is fantastic! and I love your take on the prompt! OMG! How true are your words!

    I wish many would listen...

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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