Lookie lookie
For you a cake I just did bake
Lookie lookie
I said a cake, not a cookie
True, a bite or two I did take
I was hungry, give me a break
Lookie lookie
In a list
A contest entry
- Uncommon Words for a Common Picture PIF by reeseXtheXsoldier.
600 points, ended July 10, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very cute.
I like this one! It is very cute and funny. Very good lymeric, too. Bravo and keep up the good writing!

