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Lookie Lookie (Rondelet)

Lookie lookie
For you a cake I just did bake
Lookie lookie
I said a cake, not a cookie
True, a bite or two I did take
I was hungry, give me a break
Lookie lookie

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  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    July 9, 2008

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    very cute.

    I like this one! It is very cute and funny. Very good lymeric, too. Bravo and keep up the good writing!