natural creations
combine the earth's
form and pristine
clarity to seek
sunlit moss endures
and silent granite
hugs the earth with
an endless glee
misty blue droplets
soften the eye's
perception of reality
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2411/761.jpg?1214770990
White Water
11 lines 33 words
A contest entry
- WHITE WATER by Swan song.
450 points, ended July 19, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tired of HM's (X) by PatheticKt.
550 points, ended August 26, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Such a great creation for the prompt. So very well done. Congrats on the honorable mention
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Ahh, a lovely short write you got here, indeed ~
The words penned here were definitely breathtaking
I especially like the simple, calm imagery here- good job at that!
As I typed already, this is a lovely piece
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The images in this are beautiful, I can really see where you took your inspiration from, both from the picture and the phrase "white water".
Well penned.
~lost
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Wow!!!!! This is something
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this really describes the prompt perfectly. good luck!
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Oh Carole,
This is so good. It’s smooth, joyful, elegant poetry. I like the thought that the rushing water in the beck, gurgles with an endless glee.
Thanks for posting this,
Love, Peter
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