Hey you.
Do you see?
There's this girl.
Who sits next to me.
She's got it all.
The looks, the charm.
She sees all clearly.
But to my alarm..
I've talked to my friends.
They've all said the same.
To get her a gift.
One that isn't too lame.
I asked them:
A rose? A ring? or a rake?
They sighed as they do.
"You've got to bake."
I went home that day.
And all night I worked.
I produced a single cookie.
My stomach a-churned.
The very next day.
As I sat in class.
I looked at her.
And felt like an ass.
"I made you a cookie,
But I eated it."
Author notes
For the contest thing.. thought I'd attempt one.
A contest entry
- Uncommon Words for a Common Picture PIF by reeseXtheXsoldier.
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A funny write, I really did like it. A good story told here. Thanks for entering.
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I loved your poem. Especially the last lines. Thank you for entering my contest. its greatly appreciated. I don't see alot of funny poems out and its a good thing that there are.
Your Judge
kaycee
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HAHAHAHAH
*wipes tear from the corner of my eyes*
This was so adorable! When I first started reading it, I visioned Pedro baking a cake for that girl in Napolean Dynamite. HAHA! You are a man of comedic GENIUS!!!
Warmest,
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lol awww...this was a fun poem for me to read...I can see this happening lol...best to you in the contest blessings always~ Trisha
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aww! That is so very cute! The rhymes are a bit off though, Remember: Never sacrifice quality for a rhyme.
Bravo and good luck in my contest!
The Famouse Reese Bailey
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Thanks.
Thanks for the advice, I understand what you mean.
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