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cold hands






cold hands
round my teacup
pigeons huddle





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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    Awww... like it hands like wings, hugging a cup for warmth -there I am cooing like a pigeon. Both in huddle comfort mode.
    Marlene


  • funpum
    July 15, 2008
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    Love it

    Love the image of wings holding in the warmth.


  • azure85 gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    cold hands
    round my teacup
    pigeons huddle

    Oh, the beginning of the chilly season. A cup of warm tea and the poor birds left to huddle. Very nice haiku full of the sensations of wamrth of cold, thank you so much.