Hearing your voice feeling my heart beat again
Crying when I hear your tears wishing not to cause you pain
Feeling you are the one for me
Wishing you were here so that I could heal you
Knowing you are the one that makes my heart beat
Feeling warm and safe just having you on the phone with me
Falling asleep to the words that you say
Knowing that you are the one with the key to my heart
Closing my eyes when I hear your voice
Trying to find away to have you here not just in my heart
Wishing you here wanting to be able to bring you here
My tears showing in my eyes as I miss you dearly
Wishing you be in your arms so that I could smell your spicy
Yet tangy scent and being intoxicated while I smell it
The scent being one of safety for me
Author notes
This is about the guy that i love. He is making me into a better person. He is the best person that i have been with in a really long time. I hope that I dont lose him because he is way to special to lose. He is one of the most unique people that I know.
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what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it
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GREAT POEM GOOD FEELINGS TOO
you shouldn't change what you wrote. if you look at some of my poems they may not make any sense to you at frist but then it will click in your mind of that is what it meant. you put a lot of feeling into this poem i don't think you should change a damn thing cause if proves that love can be found even in the most odd places. this may not make sense to you right away but in time you'll know what i mean.
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Don't change a thing! It's passionate, loving, and expressive. That sense of longing is like nothing else in the world. Don't change what's here, it illustrates the longing a person can have for someone else very well. I like it. Heck, I'd give you 4 applauses if I could!
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thank you i was writing that from my heart. every poem i post on here is what i feel and what i think. this is what i have been thinking since i was on the phone with him last night.
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