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Gripe Away

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Each of us have a gripe

and we just need to complain

We know that others have one too

and suffer with problems and pain

 

We know the problem is ours to solve

as we shed our crystal tears

We just want someone to listen

and tell us that they care

 

Sometime if someone would just listen

and let us talk a little while

We could free our mind of worry

and laugh or crack a smile

 

Many of us live alone

as we move into elder years

It seems that time is moving fast

and that no one really cares

 

Our gripes and complaints are similar

as we deal with progress and fear

It is a comforting feeling to me

just knowing you are near

 

So today I offer an open ear

and let you gripe away

Maybe I can't solve your problems

but I wish you a happy day

 

 

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  • PureCountry
    August 6, 2008

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    Listening

    is an art to be cultivated, as well as it should be practiced. For oftentimes, loe can be demonstrated by the sacrifice thereof.

    Wonderfully done, thank you for sharing.

    Niaish

    Silent Hawk


  • Sagerider
    July 11, 2008

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    I really like this one.

    This one is very true. Sometimes a person just needs to vent. Unfortunately It's not that easy to find someone to listen.

    • amysticwriter silver member
      July 11, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment, you're right, a good listner is hard to find...


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    im always here to listen..gripe away dear friend xx good luck


  • rbruce gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    GREAT

    A friendly receptive ear can often make life a little easier for the speaker.Great piece of writing.


  • arafura gold member
    July 9, 2008

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    "So today I offer an open ear
    and let you gripe away
    Maybe I can't solve your problems
    but I wish you a happy day"

    Great work poet! Good luck in the contest.

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