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My Lisette

[Intro]

[Verse]
Pale as night-
Like moonlight
With one bite...
(You could live forever)

[Chorus 1]
Masquerading
Lights are fading
Angel of Death
My Lisette

[Break]

[Verse]
Eyes like fire
My blood, her desire
Heed the liar
(She'll tear your heart out)

[Chorus 2]
Masquerading
Lights are fading
Angel of Death
My Lisette
Candles burning
I am turning
She brings my death
My Lisette

[Solo]

[Bridge (Lisette)]
The blood is the life, my dear
Drink up the wine
The teeth like a knife
Will make you mine

[Chorus 2 (softly)]
Masqurading
Lights are fading
She brings my death
My Lisette

[Outro]

Author notes

Anyone who wants the sheetmusic, I have it. Just im me, its an old compsition but I only recently added it... hope you guys like it. Imagine a three/four tempo with a piano and a violin/cello (havent added strings yet- something for me to do when I get time, lol).

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  • Antebellum
    March 26, 2009
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    love it! awesome. Id love to hear it.


  • Deaths Servant
    October 4, 2008
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    A lovely dark Vampire song.


  • Lamia
    July 12, 2008

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    I really like this one. Haunting and provides images that chill without being gaudy. Well done. Good luck in the contest


  • Folklor
    July 11, 2008
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    WPW VERY DARK VERY FANTASTIC LOVED IT SO ORIGINAL! STOOD OUT FROM OTHERS REALLY LOVED I


  • Werewolf Avarus
    July 9, 2008

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    This is absoloutly beautiful!! I love the wording and I could just imagin the words being sung... so haunting.

    'Wolf

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