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I want to run over your head, put my car in reverse and do it again.

While your sleeping peacefully
Im tossing and turning
Trying to forget
Everything you did to me
And really hoping, that your feeling guilty
Hoping that the guilt is cutting you up inside
Like its cutting me up on the outside
Manic laughter in the middle of the night
Im just outside your window
And I hope your afraid
Because I never forgive
And youve gone too far
My heart is warning me to do something soon
Before I lose my nerve
You know I was never a fan of the classics
Id never stab you
Wouldnt want to get my knife dirty
Maybe Id shoot you
But your not worth the bullet
Too bad you gave up on something good
Its not my problem
You went from bad to worse
I went from good to better
Now whos laughing?
You better regret
Because i'll never forget
And this is where, our story ends

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  • ApathysEnemy
    November 8, 2008
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    "You better regret
    Because i'll never forget
    And this is where our story ends"

    those were some really good lines. It created a feeling inside of me. However, the rest of the poem didn't give me a whole lot. You've got a few grammatical issues that should be edited away (like using your instead of you're in the first line and others, too, also forgetting apostrophes in words like I'm)


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 23, 2008

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    Great poem very good emotions i liked it alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • gettingoutofme
    July 21, 2008

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    This is a wonderful poem. I understand the feelings I get from it and I'm sure that they aren't the exactly the same you may feel. This was still really great and good luck in my contest.

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