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I Didn't Mean It.

She pushed me too far,
I don't know what happened,
my eyes red with anger,
are now black with sorrow.

I didn't mean it,
I didn't want it,
I still love you,
but you can't love me.

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  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    July 9, 2008

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    Great write. Short but whole story told. I liked it alot. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • retribusive
    July 9, 2008

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    Wow..

    This is very rich with emotion. Very good job.

    It flows nicely and the grammar and punctuation are right on cue, an area people on here seem to mostly lack.

    Very nice work.