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~The Truth Of The 'Best Friend'~

a best friend is someone
who f*cks with your head
tells people you told them shit
you never even said

its someone who lies
to make you feel sad
twists all your words around
to make you sound bad

there never really there
even when they tell u otherwise
only thinking of themself
not caring about your cries

always bringing you down
trying to break you inside out
screws up your every emotion
bringing back your every doubt

but i'll never let it happen
it will not break me down!!!
you wont rule my life
you will never make me frown

even though the rhyme is forced
and this poem has no flow
i feel this needed to be said
before i completely let you go....


GOOD F*CKING RIDDANCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

this is about my EX best mate, its a long story, but im so angry with her. and im sick of her shit. im sick of her jumping to a conclusions, merely from what she HEARD... so f*ck it!!!
gahhhhhhh

also, if u have any ideas for a better worded name for this peice. please let me know!!

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  • ShotgunSherri--
    July 13, 2008

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    Wow.
    I love love love this.
    I definately understand.
    And i know it gets so frustrating.

    If i wrote this, I probably would have called it "best friend, you pulled the trigger". Its from a song, Im not sure if you know it.
    But it describes the poem...

    Because she, your best friend, pulled the trigger, and caused the confusion, doubt, and all the other emotions and problems that have come from what she has asumed, and what she has heard.

    But i do like this title.
    Only one little thing...
    Truth doesn't have an 'e'.
    =]

    TERRIFIC poem.

    BRAVO!


    x.x.x.


  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    July 12, 2008
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    aww this is great. nice nice work, ive had friends like that


  • Hidden
    July 9, 2008

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    I like this! its not true for every friend, remember that but some people just suck!

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